Comic 109 - Issue 4, page 21

23rd Nov 2014, 9:00 AM in Issue 4
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23rd Nov 2014, 9:00 AM
Aaron Mocksing

I've always wanted KUWT to be a 'graphic', graphic novel. It looks cartoony on the front and the back, and then you read it and there's no sing-alongs and cheerful morals; characters die and they never come back. That's my intent one day when I'm able to acquire knowledge and tools.

However, I'm damned with piss-poor skill, bad memory, OCD, zero dollars for money and a fear of college, lol. This is another one of those "man, this could've been done so much better". There are a TON of pages where I can say that. They either don't work or I'm not soaking up the dramatic factor of it all. Even for fan art. I'm susceptible into ragequitting if I can't do it, and just go for what many people will say looks half-assed. ...and y'know, they're right. xD It is half-assed.

But alas.

I think the only thing I liked about this was Jim's sense of "I'm not leaving without my son!" moment. Eudora, as much as I like strong, independent women in the media, I'm afraid I'm not like Whedon when I have been used to weaker, soft-spoken women in my life. My mom's like that, and it was kind of a pity, since because she was like that - she was stepped on for a long time from multiple people. She was capable, yes, of being on her own and doing things, but the amount of distrust and comedy routines on her was seemingly never-ending.

I didn't base her off of my mom, but perhaps in a sense, possibly.

She's certainly a far-cry from Beverly, who I wrote out as the anti-Nellie Brie from An American Tail IV. xD Maybe not entirely like that, but I guess you'll see what I mean later on.

The point coming across this page is that Vinnie isn't just getting thrashed around, he's getting beaten to death. The focus is on Jim more than Vinnie, because I had to compress everything in less than five pages.

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